Thank you Harlequin, I've enjoyed writing this too. It's been interesting exercise to write scenes for multiple characters, trying to keep their voices consistent.
As the basic plot is so well known I've tried to twist it a little by giving the main characters reasons for wanting to enter the chocolate factory which aren't directly obvious, so Lolly seemed like a cock obsessed porn star but was really motivated by love for her lost co-star. Some of the other characters have similar hidden motives which will be revealed as the story continues.
I really do love this series (and all your other work).
ReplyDeleteThank you Harlequin, I've enjoyed writing this too. It's been interesting exercise to write scenes for multiple characters, trying to keep their voices consistent.
ReplyDeleteAs the basic plot is so well known I've tried to twist it a little by giving the main characters reasons for wanting to enter the chocolate factory which aren't directly obvious, so Lolly seemed like a cock obsessed porn star but was really motivated by love for her lost co-star. Some of the other characters have similar hidden motives which will be revealed as the story continues.
I enjoyed the twist with Lolly. Excited to see more of the story. Thank you for your site.
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