I love the idea, but do wonder if a few errors let it down - like boxes overlapping making some text unreadable. Got to say though, those images are hot, really sizzling
I see what you did with it and I do enjoy the concept a lot. As usual outstanding choice of pictures but the idea really comes to the forefront with the hints within what you wrote.
Just to clear up any confusion, the overlapped text boxes were meant to signify the husbands thought processes being suppressed beneath the tolling of the jingle bells. I really liked this set of pictures, best friend's smile is wonderfully sinister.