Oooooh this is my favorite thing you've done!!! It's so amazingly twisted and dark! I would love to see this as a more fleshed out story.Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful!
Outstanding! Reads like a novel, loved all the twists and turns. Loved it.
Amazing story! I agree with Mistress Simone I would LOVE to see this as a more fleshed out story!Great work Samantha!